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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 59
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1022



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       I wont let it be over


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    There telling me to stop crying
    Because were over
    But I won’t believe their words
    This world is spinning
    And I’m still in it
    I don’t want to chase you
    Yet you’re what my heart calls home
    I can’t dream without you
    So come to my bedside
    Wake me up from this unending nightmare
    I know it’s not over…
    I can’t live without you
    So bring me out of this hell
    Reach for my hand
    Keep me out of the depths of despair
    I know it’s not over…
    I can’t breathe without you
    Everything is spinning so fast
    I’m feeling so very dizzy
    Losing air, vision fading
    So pick me up off the ground
    Breathe life back into me
    Carry me back to our home
    I know it’s not over…
    This world just wouldn’t be right
    If we weren’t in it together
    I’m rocking back and forth
    Screaming and crying
    It’s not over
    You’re far away
    But it’s not over.




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      You love drama now don't you? Relationships shouldn't be that way though. That's maybe why he left, some people can take drama only to a certain extent. Not everybody is ready to put so much passion in a simple relationship. With the next one try to be a bit more relaxed...
    | Posted on 2008-08-14 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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