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    dots Submission Name: Ringless phonedots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsRingless phonedots
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    For every minute that goes by
    And the phone still does not ring
    Another tear falls into my lap
    I want to know why you’re just like the rest
    You hurt me daily
    No one seems to care if I cry or not
    No one seems to care if I live or not
    So knowing this, why is it 3 am
    And I’m still waiting for the phone to ring?




    Submitted on 2008-08-12 19:55:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      did you ever just think 'fuck em' and unplug the phone? i mean, why wait up? why cry? just rip that sucker right out the wall and go onto bed. maybe spend a few minutes daydreaming about throttling the person with the telephone wire before dozing off. with any luck, such thoughts will lead to an awesome dream which would involve garotting the guy who'd upset you and maybe sticking his decapitated head on a pike on your front lawn to warn any other potential boyfriend's that you refuse to sit up at 3am in the morning, waiting on their phonecall.

    maybe that was going a little too far, but you get my drift. i've used this saying to death, but once more isn't gonna hurt - 'treat them mean, keep them keen'. some guys actually live by this phrase because, let's face it, a lot of women are attracted to assholes. they like a little cockiness, a guy who isn't afraid to speak his mind, dare i say it - dominate.

    but yeah, now that i've pissed off at least half the females who read this, i'm just gonna say maybe you should stick to dating geeks, nerds and dorks. they appreciate any girl willing to give them a chance. you can mould them, teach them, pretty much make them into the bf you want. leave the assholes for the gals who like to be treated mean. you don't need to put up with that shit.
    | Posted on 2008-09-16 00:00:00 | by Jacoby | [ Reply to This ]


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