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    dots Submission Name: Messages From The Prophetsdots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 797/426/257
    Words: 456
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
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       This is a digression as to how powerless we have become,sort of like, as the non eternal animal world. We can and we must reverse the signs of the end times.


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    O,ye peoples, heed the signs of the end-times!
    You have caused much of this denigration.
    you earthlings so captivated , so enraptured, by the offerings of this world find yourselves imprisoned , impalled, upon your habitual self seeking egos. You make your wars with the pride of kings. You can not dicipher the cause of rebellion. Nor are you prone to condenscend in rectitude. You see and hear of the poor in hunger dying, then in criminal action offer not even a pence in alleviation. Nor do you even give a thought to pray for even a momentary cessation of their plight. You think the poor and destitute are images of their own making. Yet, you can not see the pride which flows from degrees of higher education enslaves the poor to perfume your feet with their sweat of labor for a half-pence a day. You take the profits of non just wages and drunk yourselves with most costly libations then sleep on beds in luxurious environs. You like Nero see your cities burning then sprawl yourselves in suburban mansions. You think that mention of sin ,crime and corruption mentioned in public news media is sufficient comemoration of rectitude. You hear the lies of public officials and consider it a necessary evil to advance the higher realm. Disease and dessication is left to efforts of non-profits while the costs of burying the victims smudges the face of morticians with smiles of escalating costs. You piously give to your own founded philantrophies then reap enormous profits of tax reductions as if the unfortunated were pawns for your avarice. You live next door to some persons and act as if the house were vacant. You see some kids in trouble languishing then blind your sight and deafen your ears to sighs of, "Please Help!" You make your vows of marriage then create your selfish inquisitions to escape momentary unpleasantries. you confuse "love" as a sin divine then empty your wombs as price of guilt. You say you are religious but vehemetly deny the power thereof. You like the pharisees of old ,decry, condemn, the sins of others so as to appear that you are devoid of spiritual laxity.
    Look here, ye peoples, you are the creators of your destruction. There is a chance of reversal if you build your self emotions into the fabric of beatitudional giving as your new testament. See Matt.5:1-12. It is then you are enabled to see the why of why you populate the earth. then you can say, truly say, you are the Amen. Amen! Amen! a-A-A-men !





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      great piece ! I have only one minor critic comment to make, wish the lines had been a little broken up, it got hard to follow. Reading on computer screens makes it even harder I find........... but still excellent stuff

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    | Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, what marvelous language you use. I must say I agree with what is stated. And sadly I'm not much better myself

    A thought-provoking piece and really stimulating read, tho i have heard the arguments a few times before. thus not the most original piece. even so i find myself liking this.

    Thank you for an interesting read

    //The Little Good Wolf
    | Posted on 2008-08-13 00:00:00 | by Wolfie | [ Reply to This ]


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