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    dots Submission Name: Mama's Lullabydots
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    Author: Good Enough
    ASL Info:    20/f/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 5/15/11
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1203
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 965



    Description:
       lyrics for my baby girl. the link is the audio of me singing it.


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    dotsMama's Lullabydots
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    Angel, Baby, don't fear the dark,
    For in darkness Mama sings to you.
    Sleep, sweet dreams, I'm here tonight,
    Singing loving lullabies.

    Dream of skies so bright and blue
    And of fields where faeries play with you
    Sleep, sweet dreams, I'll hold you tight
    Singing sweet lullabies.

    And in the night, if you're afraid,
    Mommy's here just call her name,
    She will hold you through the night
    Till the morning's bright daylight

    Dreams will take you far away,
    To a place where smiles and laughs are made
    Sleep, sweet dreams, I'm by your side
    Singing Mama's Lullaby





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      I've listened to your sung rendition of this lullaby. you have a tender gentle voice. i liked the accompanent that sounds like a rocking rocking-chair. Thanks a million for the great entertainent.
    | Posted on 2008-08-27 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poem is a true salute to motherly love. It's a tender lilting piece fit for making a beautiful salable song. Why not submit it to your favorite singer ! Maybe Beonce or a country music artist.
    it really brings back memories to me as I watched my mom sing to my younger sister who was sick. It's amazing how a baby is capable of bringing out that hidden love that dwells in everyone. This reminds of why Jesus came to us as a baby. A fav for me. A must!
    | Posted on 2008-08-13 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Very Beautiful!!!
    This write drew my mind immediately to my Handicapped sister and just reminded me just how precious and a Beautiful gift from God she truly is
    Very well said and written
    I am making this one a Favorite
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-08-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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