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Sweet Silence

Author: beatthedrum
ASL Info:    55- F - Southern CA USA
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Words: 49
Class/Type: Misc /Love
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This is about a type of love that melts all that seems real and leaves you in a place without words or thoughts.

Sweet Silence

A boudoir offering
Humble and holy prayer

It begins with words and
Then ends beyond nothing

Whisper of wispy thoughts
Crystalline filigree

Delicately born beauty
Melting in monsoon love

Relevant intelligence
Drowned in sweet silence

Submitted on 2008-08-13 04:55:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  could you make your own heart
the center of the universe
with you as the temple
where love heals
and resides?

this one is a sweet trip into silence, I like how it takes me into
a place of healing and wonder, thanks for sharing, and the inspiration. Beautiful and a cool way to share this feeling.

| Posted on 2008-08-14 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]

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