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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Silencedots
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    Author: beatthedrum
    ASL Info:    55- F - Southern CA USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 881/810/122
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 1081
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    Bytes: 337



    Description:
       This is about a type of love that melts all that seems real and leaves you in a place without words or thoughts.


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    dotsSweet Silencedots
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    A boudoir offering
    Humble and holy prayer

    It begins with words and
    Then ends beyond nothing

    Whisper of wispy thoughts
    Crystalline filigree

    Delicately born beauty
    Melting in monsoon love

    Relevant intelligence
    Drowned in sweet silence




    Submitted on 2008-08-13 04:55:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      could you make your own heart
    the center of the universe
    with you as the temple
    where love heals
    and resides?

    this one is a sweet trip into silence, I like how it takes me into
    a place of healing and wonder, thanks for sharing, and the inspiration. Beautiful and a cool way to share this feeling.

    Nan
    | Posted on 2008-08-14 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


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