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    dots Submission Name: Wingsdots
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    Author: withblindedeyez
    ASL Info:    19/m/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 83/121/58
    Words: 340
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsWingsdots
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    Embedded lies into your truth
    My eyes no longer see the radiant in you
    After all the things that weve been though
    You spread your wings and try to take flight
    But they betray you.

    YOUR WINGS OF BREAUTY NO LONGER CARRY YOU
    THE-MASK-YOU-ONCE-HID-BEHIND-AS-NOW-BECOME-YOU

    Suffer the consequences
    Of depending on these lies Just to get you through this life
    Shatter these dreams of mine, and walk with you pride
    Now these nothing left for me to do but bury you


    Slipping through this maze we call life
    Is your only way of getting through
    After all the things that Ive done for you
    With trust deny, tears slide from your eyes
    Soar above the sky.

    THESE WINGS OF DISHONESTY NOW DEVOUR YOU
    THE-MASK-YOU-ONCE-HID-BEHIND-AS-NOW-BECOME-YOU

    Suffer the consequences
    Of depending on these lies Just to get you through this life
    Shatter these dreams of mine, and walk with you pride
    Now these nothing left for me to do but bury you


    Build these bridges upon my shattered dreams
    Watch them now burn down around you
    Close eyes, towards the hand reaching out for me
    As the tear stain and soak your shirt
    You fall from the sky.

    THIS WINGS OF VANITY NOW BREAK YOU
    THE-MASK-YOU-ONCE-HID-BEHIND-AS-NOW-BECOME-YOU

    Suffer the consequences
    Of depending on these lies Just to get you through this life
    Shatter this dreams of mine
    Now these nothing left for me to do but bury you

    ILL RIP YOU. APART.
    JUST TO.CRAWL MY WAS INSIDE.
    ILL RIP YOU. APART.
    JUST TO.... SAY I ONCE EXISTED IN YOUR HEART.

    "As my hand reaches out for you, my question is what happen to you angels wings?"

    YOUR WINGS OF BEAUTY NO LONGER CARRY YOU
    THESE WINGS OF DISHONESTY DEVOUR YOU
    THESE WINGS OF VANITY BREAK YOU
    WHATS LEFT OF THIS MASK AS BECOME YOU.

    Shatter this dreams of mine
    Now these nothing left for me to do but bury you
    Please rest quietly in my memories....

    ....goodbye....





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