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    dots Submission Name: Haiku 1dots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsHaiku 1dots
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    Tiny and impure
    Moon undressed, time when I
    only shine guile bright.




    Submitted on 2008-08-16 17:08:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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