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    dots Submission Name: Flawsdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 41/64/75
    Words: 588
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 550
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3938



    Description:
       A little thing I did on this 'Perfect Earth'...


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    dotsFlawsdots
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    Eternity flared into prevelence
    into the depths of all flaws that were
    created
    Flaws that allowed the world to
    create
    holes in itself
    those holes where the dumpsters
    of all
    wrong doing.
    The dumpsters of eternity filling more and more
    never stopping
    until that filling
    has been filled
    then all the flaws of the earth spilled out into the Perfect Earth
    interacting and turning that earth into something different. Not the same.
    Humanity begun to see things differently
    Flaws were clouding their vision of perfect.
    Humans where being different and not the same
    Those flaws made contreversies between humanity.
    Humanity was not the same.
    Now flaws made humanity disagree between eachother
    Because there werent enough flaws for each human to be the same.
    Flaws did not only effect the perfect humanity.
    The Earths creatures were turned into another being.
    a new flaw
    a flaw that made creatures think.
    Feel
    Like humanity
    Those creatures started on their own
    To create, communicate with others.
    Flawed creatures had an advantage over flawed humanity.
    They all didn't like flawed humanity.
    Except the quiet few who lived in the homes of flawed humanity.
    Flawed creatures land was being taken. Not shared, taken.
    Flawed creatures faught back to take back their homes.
    Flawed Humanity wanted it still. Other Flawed humanity sided with the Flawed creatures.
    Too many flaws in this world.
    Many bloodsheds were happening on this Flawed Earth.
    Some with guns. Some with nuclear. Some with hands. Some with the mind.
    No limite to the death and destruction.
    Soon Flawed Earth was shapeless in its lands.
    Some Flawed Humanity and Flawed Creatures saw what they done.
    They destroyed what they were fighting for.
    Now all the fights are for meager food and a shelter with few dust.
    The Flawed Creatures and Flawed Humanity looked at eachother.
    They said.
    What have we done to this Perfect Earth?
    One said
    Maybe it wasn't perfect to begin with.
    All other Flawed creatures and Flawed humanity looked at the flawed human.
    Maybe we just thought it was perfect, so it was perfect.
    Some Flawed nods in the crowd agreed.
    Before the Perfect Earth was over taken by flaws, we were still fighting.
    Against the Perfect Creatures and the Perfect Humans.
    Maybe not as bad.
    But we still had taken the land of the Perfect Creatures withought any thought.
    Well most of us did it withought any thought.
    Nods and disagreements were taking place over the Flawed crowd.
    Between humanity and creatures has that all its been?
    Maybe we should have been like the creatures were.
    Share ourselves with the Perfect Earth. Said the Flawed Human.
    Another Flawed Human spoken up;
    Maybe you've been hanging out with the Flawed Creatures too long you Flawed Mutant.
    But maybe he's right replied a fellow Flawed Human.
    All we've done is take from the Perfect Earth, use the planet to store dumps.
    We never really respected the Perfect Earth.
    None of us did.
    Look at it now.
    Dust of trees, old buildings crumbling. the world a muck when it rains.
    None of us repescted it if we let it come to this.
    Not even the Flawed Creatures and Flawed Humans who seemed to respect the Perfect Earth.
    All heads shamed, of Flawed Creatures and Flawed Humanity nodded.
    A Flawed creature, old and pulpus and a Flawed human young and dirty both said;
    Maybe it is time we take Flawed Earth and turn it into Perfect Earth
    Once again,
    Together.




    Submitted on 2008-08-16 17:16:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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