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    dots Submission Name: Leave Me Alonedots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsLeave Me Alonedots
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    Point your gun in another direction
    Now that you've cried yourself to sleep
    My feelings and emotions
    Are secrets I cannot keep

    Hatred shows
    Emotions collide
    I just need some space
    Let my anger divide

    If you would all just leave me alone
    And let me be
    I wouldn't be how I am now
    I just wouldn't be me

    I see those things you're blind to
    Those things you cannot hear
    At night when I fall asleep
    I do it all through fear

    I just can't help myself
    But I do everything wrong
    I'm lettin in show
    I've heald it for so long




    Submitted on 2008-08-17 02:41:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow lizz this is a crazi poem no doubt that it is something happening in your life if u still have my gma number call me i live here again
    | Posted on 2008-08-20 00:00:00 | by Druecilla | [ Reply to This ]


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