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    dots Submission Name: A Man amungst men, alike. dots
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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsA Man amungst men, alike. dots
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    In turn, we subside wide lines
    fretful in our endavous

    It's going okay, it's going their way
    Impossible in solitude with freedom have-its
    and, small buscuit meals
    and long days ahead of us

    And,
    it's all something worth it, uselesspointless
    in our crimes and times of questioning we soon forget
    our neuro net heaven bound and, set.

    - you down untill we met.




    Submitted on 2008-08-17 10:19:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like your style a lot! And as this dosen't make much sense to me. It still seems to have a very prominent meaning.
    | Posted on 2008-08-19 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]


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