I agree with Venia, a very beautiful piece. The imagery is very surreal, you create the sense of almost being in some magical dream. So good job, I enjoyed reading it.
I love this. It doesn't need to make sense at all to be a perfectly fine poem. I took a poetry class with a woman named Janee Baugher, and when I told her how sick I was of explaining that my writing means nothing to people, she said "You tell them that poetry is not for understanding." You words are beautiful. I can see this glacier perfectly in my mind, and that's all that really matters.
Submission Name: Glacier's Point
