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    dots Submission Name: Stories Told In One Sentencedots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340/348/146
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 818
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 845



    Description:
       This is actually a contest a few of my friends and I had. We tried to tell a complete story in one sentence.

    Here are my favorites.


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    dotsStories Told In One Sentencedots
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    I found out the reason the emails to my old friend bounced is because unbeknownst to me, Steven was now Janet.

    As I lay on the ground clutching my ankle, I wished my favorite super hero had not been one with the power of flight.

    I will never again give cucumbers from my garden as a gift to a man with erectile dysfunction.

    I stumbled upon a DVD of yours in our collection and put it aside to give back, only to find out moments later that you were dead.

    I opened my dorm room door to a frantic guy who said, "There's a naked body on 4th floor and I'm not even kidding."

    You know you are too much of a people-pleaser when you, a straight girl, hook up with a lesbian who is into you and pretend to really like it so you don't hurt her feelings.




    Submitted on 2008-08-18 04:31:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awsome! i loved it all the way, and what u wrote wasreally good too. i like the short shock of them. and its definatly a game i will play with my friend. it totally cool



    Grimm Reaper
    | Posted on 2008-10-13 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]
      Sharp, real sharp.

    I like this idea. I might incorporate it into the writing game section of my forums.

    Seems like a good exercise.
    | Posted on 2008-08-18 00:00:00 | by Sheakhan | [ Reply to This ]


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