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Rose-Pink Blush

Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49 /61 /32
Words: 46
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Rose-Pink Blush

Simple sparkle
Plain glow
Easy colour

Everything is bathed

Beauty unwritten
Finds me here
Flying wonder
I see near

Brilliant skies
Fragrant blossoms
Rose-pink blush

Everything is wonder

Forget me never
Seek you now
Find my beacon
Let me bow

Submitted on 2008-08-18 05:22:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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