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Submission Name:
Rose-Pink Blush
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Author:
lynn marsters
ASL Info:
20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:
3.41 - 49/61/32
Words:
46
Class/Type:
Misc/Misc
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Rose-Pink Blush
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Simple sparkle
Plain glow
Easy colour
Everything is bathed
Beauty unwritten
Finds me here
Flying wonder
I see near
Brilliant skies
Fragrant blossoms
Rose-pink blush
Everything is wonder
Forget me never
Seek you now
Find my beacon
Let me bow
Submitted on 2008-08-18 05:22:03
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