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    dots Submission Name: Rose-Pink Blushdots
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    Author: lynn marsters
    ASL Info:    20/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49/61/32
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 744
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    dotsRose-Pink Blushdots
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    Simple sparkle
    Plain glow
    Easy colour

    Everything is bathed

    Beauty unwritten
    Finds me here
    Flying wonder
    I see near

    Brilliant skies
    Fragrant blossoms
    Rose-pink blush

    Everything is wonder

    Forget me never
    Seek you now
    Find my beacon
    Let me bow




    Submitted on 2008-08-18 05:22:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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