Rose-Pink Blush by lynn marsters

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Submission Name: Rose-Pink Blush dots

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Author:	lynn marsters
ASL Info:	20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:	3.41 - 49/61/32
Words:	46

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	744
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	393

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Rose-Pink Blush dots

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Simple sparkle
Plain glow
Easy colour

Everything is bathed

Beauty unwritten
Finds me here
Flying wonder
I see near

Brilliant skies
Fragrant blossoms
Rose-pink blush

Everything is wonder

Forget me never
Seek you now
Find my beacon
Let me bow

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