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    dots Submission Name: an angles teardots
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    Author: williamwallace7
    ASL Info:    18/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 8/5/9
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsan angles teardots
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    my heart brakes at the sound of finality
    is it all in my mind or is it the death of morality
    my soul cries for those lost in time
    is standing for justice now thought as a crime
    why is everyone so terrified of dieing
    and to avoid it we will do anything our minds are lying
    the time of valor even at the cost of death is done
    sometimes i feel that the force of darkness has won
    who will stand in the night and never give in
    who will fight to the death even if theres no chance to win
    who will sacrifice everything they know and love
    for a solemn chance of help from above
    i feel the end of man is coming because of fear
    this is just the cry and hope of a single angles tear




    Submitted on 2008-08-18 20:24:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      when you think every thing has gone wrong
    keep your hope and courage strong
    and have faith in your heart and you will endure
    | Posted on 2008-08-20 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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