Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: advice from a patron saint pt. 2dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: silentpoison
    ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204/259/118
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 682
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 990



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsadvice from a patron saint pt. 2dots
    -------------------------------------------


    when you understand that what you're telling is a story. it isn't happening anymore. "When you realize the story you're telling is just words, when you can crumble it up and throw your past in the trashcan, then we'll figure out who you're going to be."

    -Chuck Palehnuick-


    There is no mercy in your mind, so don't let it consume you. Consummation will cause you to crash. Just take a look back and enjoy things as they were. Because what it was, is exactly that. At the end of the road it's all just the dirt you stepped on to get to where you are now. People come and go. Some people leave a big impact and some disappear in passing. So take this from me. What has happened dosen't need to cause what you do. What you do, defines who you are, not who you were. Who you were is a shadow cast aside. Don't let your past define you because there is always be room for change. And Change is constant.




    Submitted on 2008-08-19 04:55:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    164781

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    On Loop written by Daniel Barlow
    This written by Chelebel
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    Commencement written by Ramneet
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Bond written by saartha
    ME written by jjd
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    A Drink written by jjd
    To written by SavedDragon
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry