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    dots Submission Name: Restless windsdots
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    Author: Sirbongatron
    ASL Info:    19/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 19/18/21
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 50
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    dotsRestless windsdots
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    Lost in a whirlwind
    Spinning in the dark
    Dante’s foretelling
    Of the lover’s mark
    Specter hands at finger’s reach,
    Whisk and waver ‘round the soul
    Darkness is all you have to hold
    An empty void of love untold




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      Dante’s death was foretold by a dishevelled woman. Spector, the dark angel, just waited for the death, dancing around his soul. All that is left for him is the darkness. I’m not sure who this lover is, I might have the wrong story here.

    I really liked your poem and style, I think it made me think of my own; I got the feeling of being lost in darkness, and somewhere spector waiting for me, quite scary.
    | Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]



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