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    dots Submission Name: I Hate You.dots
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    Author: DemolishedSoul
    ASL Info:    15 Female Italy
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 498
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 653



    Description:
       This Is A Version Of A Peom Towards A Guy I Really Fucking Hate.
    :D


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    dotsI Hate You.dots
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    I Hate You;
    You Took Me Forgranted.

    Swore To Fake Lines;
    Surely I'd Fall...

    You Twisted The Stakes;
    You Made Me Look Fake.

    I Hope You Burn In Hell;
    Rot In Peace.

    Used And "Loved"
    You Proved Me Right.
    Never Loving At All.

    That One Drunken Night;
    You Were By My Side;

    Told Your Friends
    You Wanted My Body;

    You Wanted That One Thing
    I Still Had; My Virginity.

    Lucky Me;
    Im Still The Same;

    I Hope She Breaks Your Heart.
    :)




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