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    dots Submission Name: A Man Who Writesdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 711
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 487



    Description:
       Something i've had written a while back. Haven't had much new stuff lately so just posting old ones. Looking for something to inspire me again.
    *Edited*


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    dotsA Man Who Writesdots
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    There is a man who writes,
    About things he does not know.
    But they are in sight
    Of his inner-soul.
    He fiends over ever word.
    To make all perfect,
    The things he has in mind.
    A mind dapped in absurd.
    To make his thoughts surface,
    In a world torn and tattered.
    He tries to cry to the people,
    In a variety of sentences.
    They do not listen.
    But he still writes
    And that's all that matters.




    Submitted on 2008-08-20 02:11:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very fine and magnificent execution.Dude, don't change this.It's fine the way it is just to throw that out there.Any man who writes in terms of 'Dramatic social effect on reality' needs to read this.My biggest and most intriguing way of putting this in shorter words is...A man writes for the sake of his soul to manage what must be told with a ambition to fight being ignored, he continues.

    One of the best things I have read about the human writing ability connected to the internal system on the male side of things in quite a long time and causes me to look at my own similar works but over all I see a long thick string of thought put into this for just fifteen lines to accomplish what any man on this earth writing what he knows best can understand, or maybe not.

    With a thumbs up, it's [censored] awesome and every single word is in it's greatest place to get the message to the mind eye and provoke that thought pattern.Or maybe that justs me because I tend to look at it more deeper just on the thought of myself of relating to it.

    I enjoyed reviewing you consistently and reward you with the FAV.Take it, you've earned from me.
    It's a twinkling masterpiece of a pen sized star.

    RG
    | Posted on 2011-01-25 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      But he still writes
    And that's all that matters

    What can i say? Those 2 lines really hit me :) its short, nice to read and in a way, meaningful. I could relate to it perfectly. Nice write dude :) Keep on writing!

    - Fallen One
    | Posted on 2008-08-20 00:00:00 | by Fallen One | [ Reply to This ]
      This kept me interested, I liked the opening rhyme a good bit. Seems like you're probably describing yourself (and my myself heheh). Should the line, "In varies of sentences" be "In a variety of sentences"? Also I like the ending too, I think because I can relate. Well like I said it kept me interested but I didn't see anything too special, but of course that's just me.
    | Posted on 2008-08-20 00:00:00 | by bkj43 | [ Reply to This ]


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