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    dots Submission Name: My VooDoo Doll. </3dots
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    Author: DemolishedSoul
    ASL Info:    15 Female Italy
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Betrayal
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    dotsMy VooDoo Doll. </3dots
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    I want you to know that I will never
    forgive you for the shit that you've
    done to me.
    I thought I hurt you; You used me
    for your own personal use.
    I hope she rips out your
    heart and uses it against you.
    You're the most hypocritical bastard
    to walk the earth. Don't ever
    speak my name again. The hatred that
    I feel for you grows deeper and deeper
    into my soul.
    I want to hit you. Destroy you.
    Murder you. Kill you in the worst
    way possible. Torture you.
    Put you threw pain. Make you
    my VooDoo Doll. </3.




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