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    dots Submission Name: Darwin's Impression of Freud...dots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsDarwin's Impression of Freud...dots
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    Darwin's Impression of Freud Being Detained In Customs

    If viruses were sentient
    Would they split atoms, split continents
    Split nuclear family values
    Like so much emotional chaff
    As they taught extinct species to laugh

    Would they become alt rock proto-punks
    Third party candidates
    Eden?s greens keepers with a grudge
    And mercifully sedate
    Their hosts before the end?

    I?d rather believe
    The big bang was
    Merely
    The big decay

    And

    Protoplasmic entities
    Have become the modern
    Robber barons
    We fondly call mankind

    But enough about me
    How?s the delusion business?




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      holy crap man.

    i think i lost verbiage while away.



    awesome piece.
    | Posted on 2008-09-19 00:00:00 | by Pietro | [ Reply to This ]
      
    You tend to pack alot into pieces. Much to ponder and something to wrap my brain around.
    I really don't know much about Freud. And the only thing I know about Darwin is the evolution bit. Maybe someday I will read his theory in entirety. (Though I do believe in evolution because everyting changes and adapts. And if something cannot adapt... it dies off).

    In all honesty, this is just a smart piece. With bits and pieces to really consider.

    I especially like this part -

    Id rather believe
    The big bang was
    Merely
    The big decay

    in some ways it was the beginning of the end, or the beginning and the end, or the end of the beginning... (my mind goes round and round)...

    hmmmm...

    I enjoy poems that I feel could be discussed, and this is one of them...

    | Posted on 2008-08-24 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel like the level of intelligence with which you wrote this piece requires that I do two things:

    1.) Get older &
    2.) Take up a hobby of reading psychology and science text-books.

    I appreciate the elegant humor and the sarcasm. This piece reminds me of lyrics from some song written by a band named, "The Weakerthans". They were one of my favorites in college.

    If you get a chance, I think you might appreciate a song called, "Plea from a Cat Named Virtue".

    Cheers Bill
    | Posted on 2008-08-20 00:00:00 | by UnspokenDreamer | [ Reply to This ]


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