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    dots Submission Name: Praisesdots
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    Author: never_far_away
    ASL Info:    18-female-TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 105/90/53
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 159
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       this is a poem i wrote when it was raining...i was really happy because it was the first time it had rained in a long time


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    Oh, great Heavens
    You have quenched
    This thirsty land
    Much praise I give to thee;
    For the rains of life
    Have once again
    Visited this place-
    You have renewed my hope
    And set my senses ablaze
    I once more offer you praise




    Submitted on 2008-08-20 19:01:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Excellent! You not only have given thanks for the rain in this lovely poem, but for the bounty that God pours into our life as well! Nice work, pretty lady!
    | Posted on 2008-09-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, a most apt and agile prayer penned here from the heart! Most well done! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-08-26 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. Most people don't appreciate stuff like that. Come to think of it it must have been really dry. LoL
    | Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by wordyb | [ Reply to This ]



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