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Author:	MINTPATTY
Elite Ratio:	2.47 - 18/2/7
Words:	65

Class/Type:	Misc/Love
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love?

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Love
What is Love?
Love is beautiful
But behold beauty is not a quality
But a fleeting moment…
a prudent decaying of heart and mind
Love is betrayal of the soul
Like reaching out to the sun
and spiraling into a black hole
Love is a trap for the trapper
a drunken stupor of hopes and dreams
that'll never reach the surface

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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