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    Author: MINTPATTY
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 18/2/7
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    Love
    What is Love?
    Love is beautiful
    But behold beauty is not a quality
    But a fleeting moment…
    a prudent decaying of heart and mind
    Love is betrayal of the soul
    Like reaching out to the sun
    and spiraling into a black hole
    Love is a trap for the trapper
    a drunken stupor of hopes and dreams
    that'll never reach the surface




    Submitted on 2008-08-21 01:08:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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