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    dots Submission Name: a century of dispairdots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsa century of dispairdots

    the alien heart
    obscures into the wild
    of imagination
    the way a clam,
    more likely to remain open
    when the moon sings,
    will spill out pearls
    until its earthly delights
    illuminate the evening's
    silver beach.

    & we found eachother here,
    dusting off the remains
    of the decades ashes,
    batting eyelashes
    as if it were a method
    of communication
    whose mathmatics,
    despite geometry,
    redifined a century
    of dispair.

    i'll take your hands
    into mine
    where the pools
    of our elastic folding
    reel into the blue
    of everything.
    & where each footstep
    is another phantom collapsing
    into the moments that we can't feel
    unless we dance,
    oblivious to our own
    perilous descents.

    i push my fingers
    through an absent sky
    to judge the distance
    there between us.
    & i pluck at each star
    with a mind
    of broken youth,
    trying in broken grasps
    to reposition
    the heavens to describe
    some hopeful future,
    mindful of the vacuum
    we inhabit
    with our hearts..

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