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    dots Submission Name: smile.dots

    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    it's scares me sometimes,
    knowing that i will never see your smiling face again,
    i don't know how i drag myself out of bed everyday, to go to a place that i know all i'll think of is you,
    a place filled with memories.
    i'm so scared,
    i don't know if i can do this anymore,
    all i want is out.
    i'm so done.
    i can barely look at a picture of you without breaking down.
    for some reason everything reminds me of you now.
    sometimes when i think of you, i end up laughing and crying at the same time,
    because i love you, but i miss you.
    i just want to hug you one more time,
    and never let go.
    i miss you so much, and i know that no matter how much i say that, you won't just show up again.
    i wish you were here, to hug me everyday, just like it used to be.
    just not being able to see you kills me.
    i feel like i haven't seen the sun in days, because all that's left are clouds.
    i love you.

    Submitted on 2008-08-21 20:44:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can definitely relate. I loved this girl , but we graduated I moved to Florida and she to Chicago. I thought about her every day for like a long time. To tell you the truth I am now getting over it and its been almost 2 years. Thanks for the memories. Its good to have someone i can relate to with that.
    | Posted on 2008-08-22 00:00:00 | by wordyb | [ Reply to This ]

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