i sorta like, sorta don't get it... i like the first stanza, it really got me into the poem and had this sort of 'single flame barely glowing' feeling to it that i l.ike to use when writing about spiritual stuff. um, other than that line i thought i got it 'till the end when it talks about something going up into the sky. is that the log that is burning, the fire that is glowing or the smoke floating?
...Hearts Grim
Regardless, I think this does associate very well to life. Not in terms of physically and literally, but in a metaphoric way of saying sometimes things are what they seem.
Brilliantly, written I think. Must add you to favs.
Abbas
This write for some reason related extremely well to Human Life for me
If you think about it we are only here a very short time but when the time of death arrives we fight it stronger then anything we ever have in our life
Excellent Job with this Abbas
It is Great to see you Posting again
I really missed talking with you
God Bless
Ron
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