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    dots Submission Name: Longing.dots
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    Author: UnspokenDreamer
    ASL Info:    21
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 542/753/205
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsLonging.dots
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    What if every longing of our hearts was meant be fulfilled by God?

    It would change the way we pursued him, wouldn't it?

    Suddenly...
    It would make us want to chase after him with everything we have...
    It would make us change the way we woke up in the morning...
    The way we live...
    The way we think...
    The way we see the world around us...

    It would change everything

    ...if we really believed that He is the answer.




    I think it's true.




    Submitted on 2008-08-24 04:20:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Alleluia ! God is alive in your words. We poor deficient humans can not see the rose God grows for us by our rathers to play with throns. We pray our pious thoughts then sit back in an easy chair await his magical power. That magical power is the rose that perfumes our brain and mental powers to aid us to perform God's will for us. If a seed did not fall to the ground and die (meaning to germinate) it would not grow into that which it was meant to be.




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    | Posted on 2008-08-28 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Or, to extend this metaphor in a slightly twisted tangent, suppose we pursued God as passionately as that person/object/concept we love and desire most. Then He would become more tangible than reality and more focused than hope. Of course, that isn't likely to happen as long as deity and life are kept in separate compartments; one to be lived and the other to be dryly reverenced. The day we paasionately live as if every breath were God will be the day we find Him. Until then, we remain the punchline of a joke we don't understand.

    Just my thoughts on how easily some problems are solved (or not).

    Bill
    | Posted on 2008-08-25 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      sometimes... you once felt that way and still want to but for reason you can't quite get to that point...it's like you doubt...how does one get over the doubt? how does one get out of the funk and get it right again if for some reason you can't fully give your heart again?


    I used to feel that way and still want to but...

    I'm Glad you feel so passionately as to share this...
    | Posted on 2008-08-25 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ]
      My Friend my Heart is completely filled with The Lords Love
    I know exactly of what you are speaking of and to be Honest with you there are those of us who are already filled with His Love
    There is noone I Love more then The Lord
    My Mother and Family who those of you who know me know I Love Dearly I will always Love but Honestly I Will Always Love The Lord more
    Thank You for sharing this
    This definately made me think and Hopefully your words will open the Eyes of some others so they can finally see The Lords Love and Let His Love Guide them to Happiness
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-08-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      But, he doesn't, so we don't. And, because of this we strive or survive, until we die.
    | Posted on 2008-08-24 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]


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