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    dots Submission Name: alien probesdots
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    Author: discombobulated
    ASL Info:    26/m/nz
    Elite Ratio:    5.22 - 81/63/24
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Spoof/Satire
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    another encounter with a conspiracy freak.
    he's a good friend, but damn, all this talk
    makes me think i'll go crazy, or be annihilated
    by the illuminati and the one world order,
    and a u.n. resolution to decrease the population
    to a controllable five hundred million.

    i'd rather my ashes scattered to each
    quadrant off a cliff, i'd rather a mausoleum
    inscribed with murals to unspeakable names.
    i touch the sound of violet and wonder:
    is there mischief to be found today, is there
    a weekday where it shouldn't be so gray?
    i'll find this. i'll scrape the earth with
    mortar and pestle, grind each golden grain
    in a quern and raise loaves in exchange.

    another encounter which makes me queasy.

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      I certainly hope these probes haven't encircled Uranus. Talk about prodigously painful plumbing of the depths by nutjobs with neuro-transmitters, that would certainly be the end of all agonies (short of an afterlife spent with lunatics who don't realize they're dead). Anyway, what's left to say that I haven't avoided mentioning already, eh?

    Just remember one thing, those who claim there are aliens everywhere are not of this earth...
    | Posted on 2008-08-25 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      I felt like I was listening to a 24 hour marathon of Art Bell reading this
    Just kidding my Friend but Honestly thios is a little different from the writes Im used to reading but put together very well
    Thanks for sharing this
    I found it very interesting
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-08-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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