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    dots Submission Name: So Fakedots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.72 - 603/832/350
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 168
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 84



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    dotsSo Fakedots
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    Love, scum, die.
    Hate, forget, slammer,
    I wasn't worth the drive.




    Submitted on 2008-08-25 04:16:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The musician bent is showing. Any other hints on learning to bang on a guitar? I just bought one.
    | Posted on 2008-09-13 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your style. You have the skill, for few words needed, to tell a whole story of emotion. I can feel it, and I can see it. When reading these few words, I vision a life, a life terrible and sad. of rejection and abuse. these words are inspiring to me, they need nothing. Thank You for posting it, and sharing it with all of us.

    Grimm R.
    | Posted on 2008-08-28 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]
      True....passed me by as well. I have failed to put a finger on what it is about this poem.

    Too short for me to understand much. Gets me thinking about what you could mean but... alas!
    | Posted on 2008-08-26 00:00:00 | by nevender | [ Reply to This ]
      This could be interpreted in so many ways, but the real meaning has passed me by.

    I know this much, it’s depressing, you feel like you are worthless, like scum in a jail, live is not worth it to live in it, but outside of it. Maybe that’s all you meant, but I got this inkling that there’s more to it.

    None the less, you achieved your goal and made me think far too long over three lines.

    Nice write.
    | Posted on 2008-08-25 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]


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