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    dots Submission Name: I wonder..dots

    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just a little something that was eating its way out of my brain at work..

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    dotsI wonder..dots

    I have always wondered
    what it might be like
    to slip into someone elses skin
    and be them for a day
    rather than myself..

    I am sure their skin
    wouldn't fit just right
    and I would have to wiggle around
    to get the creases out,
    maybe tape a few tears as well,
    yet still it might be interesting..

    Perhaps they would be smarter than I
    and make important decisions all day,
    or they might have a boring job
    they hate to subject themselves to day after day,
    yet it would still be interesting
    to see through someone elses eyes
    and know that I am doing something different
    making different choices
    just to see if life is harder
    or easier for other people..

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      The endless possibilities of those questions we will never know the answer to. Life is life, and each life is its own. Everyone's life is the same in the sense that all they will ever know is their life- theirs and no one elses'.

    I do like the part where you talk about maybe little things would change and it wouldn't be exactly the same. I've never thought about it that way before. Nice use of your thoughts onto paper.
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by lovedeathsdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      relaxed and conversational in tone yet suitably intense questions i've asked too. what would it be like to be someone else just for a day? ...the daydreams are endless.

    did you mean for your last line to be a question? ...makes more sense that way, i guess, yep.

    | Posted on 2008-08-28 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]

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