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I wonder..

Author: Maskannai
ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
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Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Just a little something that was eating its way out of my brain at work..

I wonder..

I have always wondered
what it might be like
to slip into someone elses skin
and be them for a day
rather than myself..

I am sure their skin
wouldn't fit just right
and I would have to wiggle around
to get the creases out,
maybe tape a few tears as well,
yet still it might be interesting..

Perhaps they would be smarter than I
and make important decisions all day,
or they might have a boring job
they hate to subject themselves to day after day,
yet it would still be interesting
to see through someone elses eyes
and know that I am doing something different
making different choices
just to see if life is harder
or easier for other people..

Submitted on 2008-08-26 03:42:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The endless possibilities of those questions we will never know the answer to. Life is life, and each life is its own. Everyone's life is the same in the sense that all they will ever know is their life- theirs and no one elses'.

I do like the part where you talk about maybe little things would change and it wouldn't be exactly the same. I've never thought about it that way before. Nice use of your thoughts onto paper.
| Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by lovedeathsdeath | [ Reply to This ]
  relaxed and conversational in tone yet suitably intense questions i've asked too. what would it be like to be someone else just for a day? ...the daydreams are endless.

did you mean for your last line to be a question? ...makes more sense that way, i guess, yep.

| Posted on 2008-08-28 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]

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