Description: !!NOTE!!-
Before you read this, please note that it's not going to make much sense and flow well to you because you cant really hear the little jingle ive got in my head. BUT its about a girl who has this friend in the army, and he's been in iraq for a while, he comes back for a week leave and they hang out almost the whole time he's there.
This war. -------------------------------------------
and it all comes down to this...
and if you didnt have to go
well then id take ya to a show
and you know when you go
your gonna be missed
so if i never see you
just wanted you to know...
that ill never forget, when we first kissed.
i may not be able to pin point your flow but i got one in my head now too. i like the flow. it works. is it a true story? ill pray for him to stay safe.
Firstly, good title. Really. Without the description though, I'll definitely be lost with this piece. Like the simplicity of the expression, as the 'war' may represent both the physical and internal struggles.
Submission Name: This war.
