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    dots Submission Name: bullshtdots
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    Author: hobbler619
    ASL Info:    19/m/iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2.04 - 9/30/9
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsbullshtdots
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    y in life do we always sit here in our hollow thoughts with noone to help us concure these disatrous thoughts. everyday all the people in the world think about killing some one at one point in time a day




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