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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    & it seems so penultimate
    from here,
    the poetry of distant moods,
    as if the airey wine
    of far away companions
    could cataglott
    into some new language
    of mesmerizing syllables
    & sounds.

    the drama
    of new waves
    continues crest to trough
    a swollen foamy tide
    of untapped potentialities.
    could i type
    each day into a city
    meant brimmed with umbrellas
    like some child's
    dreamy forest
    cathedral?

    the romance
    of the south
    has lost...

    i'm looking
    for new streets
    to glister light's
    remaining companions.
    the highway is humming me
    into it's gentle
    pavement song.

    i will find
    new heavens
    in the openings
    of undiscovered maps.

    between your holes
    & mine,
    no honey drips
    in infinite smiling.




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