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    dots Submission Name: Death Carddots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 1041/1117/534
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsDeath Carddots
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    The cards I shuffled as the taper waned,
    I cut the deck and then each half I laid
    Like crates upon some fine oak promenade,
    My beating heart, so hard it sweat and strained,
    As I drew out a card the Fates ordained,
    And threw upon the table one black spade,
    Then knew that life and love had each betrayed
    Me here, the awful death card so obtained.

    And then I dreamed of you, and how you’d gone
    To leave me so bereft and all alone,
    You flew like some fell banshee taking flight,
    And now I knew I’d never see the dawn.
    Above my head they’d place a polished stone,
    I doused the wick, then walked into the night.





    Submitted on 2008-08-27 17:54:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Excellent poem, with a devastating mood, but expertly penned with exquisite structure, theme, and meter! Aaah, Lady Fate, that fickle lady, has turned her face away yet again!

    | Posted on 2008-08-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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