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    dots Submission Name: a symphony of japing poems dots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsa symphony of japing poems dots

    what part of the fire
    becomes unspeakable
    when the absence
    of light
    provokes the miracle
    of darkness
    to comply?

    there is this emptiness
    that absorbs the space
    between everything
    that i've ever known.
    i claw at it,
    year after year,
    in the hopes that the void
    will open to me
    it's secrets
    like unfolding flowers
    from my sacred thumbs.

    yet somehow,
    though always
    just within my grasp,
    it remains so utterly allusive.
    the costumes of childhood
    remember me more
    the way i am
    than i do.

    i stare at broken things
    & relate to them
    my inner belongings.
    as if these antiques,
    these ghosts
    of my enamour
    could possibly
    the loss of structure
    that they've known.

    the evils
    of the ancient wood
    are practicing
    their playful shadows
    on my skin.
    if i could just
    tear into the beasts
    of clean relief
    i'd administer
    a symphony of japing poems
    into my waiting flesh.

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