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    dots Submission Name: Find Me Dreaming.dots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFind Me Dreaming.dots
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    Just because a voice can not be heard,
    Does not mean that what I feel is not true.
    These eyes that see everything—
    Fall deeply
    And gaze mesmerizingly at you.

    Don’t ever underestimate
    Every move that I make—
    Sharing the same space
    Makes this heart ache
    And mind thrive with anticipation.

    Never overlook a noticeable expression—
    Smiling every single time you speak
    And stay near me.

    Perhaps one day you will see—
    What remains in thought and dream;
    But for now I will lie silently among the clouds,
    Waiting to be unveiled—
    By you.




    Submitted on 2008-08-29 01:21:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very meaningful, like this one as it brought back some distant memory for me,

    Jamar2
    | Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this you put into words what I've been feeling lately, it's nice that someone can explain it, thanks.
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]


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