Find Me Dreaming.

Author: xXCptn_SephyXx ASL Info:    22/f/PA Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46 /119 /104 Words: 100

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Find Me Dreaming.

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Just because a voice can not be heard, Does not mean that what I feel is not true. These eyes that see everything— Fall deeply And gaze mesmerizingly at you. Don’t ever underestimate Every move that I make— Sharing the same space Makes this heart ache And mind thrive with anticipation. Never overlook a noticeable expression— Smiling every single time you speak And stay near me. Perhaps one day you will see— What remains in thought and dream; But for now I will lie silently among the clouds, Waiting to be unveiled— By you.

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very meaningful, like this one as it brought back some distant memory for me, Jamar2

| Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]

I like this you put into words what I've been feeling lately, it's nice that someone can explain it, thanks.

| Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]

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