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Submission Name: Find Me Dreaming. dots

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Author:	xXCptn_SephyXx
ASL Info:	22/f/PA
Elite Ratio:	2.65 - 46/119/104
Words:	100

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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Find Me Dreaming. dots

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Just because a voice can not be heard,
Does not mean that what I feel is not true.
These eyes that see everything—
Fall deeply
And gaze mesmerizingly at you.

Don’t ever underestimate
Every move that I make—
Sharing the same space
Makes this heart ache
And mind thrive with anticipation.

Never overlook a noticeable expression—
Smiling every single time you speak
And stay near me.

Perhaps one day you will see—
What remains in thought and dream;
But for now I will lie silently among the clouds,
Waiting to be unveiled—
By you.

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very meaningful, like this one as it brought back some distant memory for me,

Jamar2
| Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
I like this you put into words what I've been feeling lately, it's nice that someone can explain it, thanks.
| Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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