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    dots Submission Name: This Gravedots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 409
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I wrote this and it is supposed to be about the relationship between me and my father. Just let me know what you all think as usual


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    dotsThis Gravedots
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    Another day gone,
    As I lay in this dark grave,
    Damned to eternal pain.
    Eternal disappointment.
    This grave so small,
    I beat the wooden walls.
    Fists bruised
    Beaten and bashed,
    Blood appearing.

    The walls fine,
    This wooden box no damages done.
    I scream out so loud,
    Screaming in hope to be heard,
    Heard by you.
    Priest.
    Guider.
    Protector.
    King of the land.
    But you donít seem stir.

    I am in hope that you will see.
    In hope you will end this eternal pain,
    Yet you just keep causing eternal disappointment.
    I guess a leopard can never change its spots,
    I donít see why I should keep trying.

    This grave I will always have.




    Submitted on 2008-08-29 07:15:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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