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    dots Submission Name: the kind of lovedots
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    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 22/20/25
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsthe kind of lovedots
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    If this was the kind of love that I thought it was
    You would have descended from above
    It's too bad that we no longer know each other
    Now you are not enough and I need another
    It's not like I can ever forget you
    But I've done it before so I can move through

    If this was the kind of love I had heard about
    I wouldn't have felt so lost in the clouds
    It's so sad that we could never be true
    But then again, I never really knew you
    And it's not like I'll ever forgive you
    For the the things you did and did not mean to do

    If this was any kind of love, I think I would know
    And if that were the case, there would be something left for me to show
    It's no wonder we turned out this way
    We never said the words that we needed to say
    And it's not like we didn't really care
    But that doesn't cancel out the needles that we shared

    And I think that I am already past this
    I seem to have remembered where I put my fist
    Somewhere in your face
    Because I had caught such a case
    And it left a very foul taste
    Rotting in your place




    Submitted on 2008-08-29 11:54:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      to me it sounds like falling in love to fast and finding out you don't really care much for them. "And if that were the case, there would be something left for me to show" I know the feeling like you have nothing to say but need too.
    | Posted on 2008-12-15 00:00:00 | by BloodLustKira | [ Reply to This ]


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