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tiny kisses

Author: Joachim
ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361 /264 /178
Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I found this sweet thing floating around somewhere and wondered at the gentleness and thoughtfulness it expresses. Joachim

tiny kisses

tiny kisses
Author: debi mc cauley

a tiny kiss
sweet and tender
a precious moment
we always remember

Submitted on 2008-08-29 15:42:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Something true to my style... short and sweet... yet it evokes such beautiful images. One of love and tenderness and of being loving and kind. Creating moments of bliss and memories to treasure forever.

Glad you caught this one 'floating' around :-)
| Posted on 2008-08-29 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]

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