Wow, reading this... I can completely connect with that. I've seen this happen to many people, and I did really enjoy reading over this, you see... I have never been able to put that affect to words, but I liked the way you put it... ALLOT!
Just one little thing... Punctuation, I can be sort of a grammar freak, and the fact that there was no... Capitalization and no paragraphing... *shudders*
A little red flag went up x)
Other than that I liked how you put the ending, the last sentence was probably my favorite, so yeah... Keep it up!