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    dots Submission Name: Wantdots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 468
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1088



    Description:
       I wrote this in favor of the idea that everybody wants something.. but we are never really sure how to get it or what really to do with it.. Just how I've been feeling lately...


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    dotsWantdots
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    What do I want
    I'm not quite sure...
    at times
    i want to be loved..
    really and truely
    unquestioned
    and sure
    but i have that...
    but is it wrong to want more?
    At times i want wealth
    but I've found that to be a variant situation..
    what my be rich to you today
    maybe crap to you tomorrow
    but another man's trash
    is another man's treasure...
    Wonder what I am in that case..
    A piece of coal..-trash
    or a diamond in the ruff- treasure..?
    Who knows..?
    At times i want to be unforgettable
    But then that would require me to forget myself...
    Now wouldn't it...?
    ..and i can't do that- even if i try..
    Sometimes I want happiness
    but happiness is like beauty
    And yeah I want that too-beauty
    but it's all in what you make it
    it's all up to the beholder...
    So what is it that I want?
    I guess to live...
    Whatever it is and what ever it takes to do that...




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