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    dots Submission Name: Lovin lovedots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 496
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 360



    Description:
       It's a thought I had about the idea of love and how it effects people.. I mean what is it all really?


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    dotsLovin lovedots
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    to be in love
    with love
    isn't really love..
    just a silly idea that keeps you piddling
    twiddling along
    in hopes that you find someone that believes as you
    and in some cases
    do as you do
    and at the end of it all
    you accept it
    So if that is to be in love...
    What is it to be loved?




    Submitted on 2008-08-30 18:51:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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