Lovin love by JTrickly

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Submission Name: Lovin love dots

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Author:	JTrickly
ASL Info:	23/female/
Elite Ratio:	1.69 - 10/4/13
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Love
Total Views:	496
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	360

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It's a thought I had about the idea of love and how it effects people.. I mean what is it all really?

Lovin love dots

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to be in love
with love
isn't really love..
just a silly idea that keeps you piddling
twiddling along
in hopes that you find someone that believes as you
and in some cases
do as you do
and at the end of it all
you accept it
So if that is to be in love...
What is it to be loved?

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.