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    dots Submission Name: Beautifuldots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 487
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 877



    Description:
       With beauty it should be within self.. yet the responsibility is always left to the beholder...ain't that funny?!!
    Think of that when reading this poem/ freeverse


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    dotsBeautifuldots
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    Beautiful

    What is really beautiful
    Is it what you are to me?
    Or me to you..?
    Is it seen or the unseen
    IS it even really real
    Is it even really obtainable
    Could Beautiful be a name, a color...
    Something other
    Other than the small conceivable,make-believe-able thing that you
    Them
    They
    That
    Want me to be
    Supposibly need me to be?
    Beautiful
    Is that really what you see?
    Cause to me I see...
    Hell I see me...
    The simple
    The plain
    The average
    The insane
    The unquestionable, unremarkable, indefinable...
    -in some cases
    intolerable, yet always lovable
    ME...
    So yeah I guess you can say,
    Without delay or dismay...
    I am beautiful
    And beautiful is me.




    Submitted on 2008-08-30 19:01:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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