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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 423
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    Description:
       This needs a title.. I dedicate this to The Creator and all the thing in this life he has given me..


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    You love me
    When I have nothing
    You love me
    Though I am no one
    You love me no matter what I do
    You love me
    Despite what others may think
    You love me
    Regardless the things I say
    Your are the Alpha & Omega
    The Maker & The Taker
    But yet...
    ...You love me

    Only you Lord can be such a great & wondrous lover to me
    There is no debt I can pay
    No part in the play of life I can play
    No great life I can save
    No recommendation I can aquire
    -Nor application I can submit
    To equal of the love that you have for me
    But there is one thing I can do...
    To show you how thankful I am
    & how much I love you
    Is to give my life eternally to you...




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