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    dots Submission Name: Teasing me...(killin' me softly)dots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsTeasing me...(killin' me softly)dots
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    Hands on my body...
    So firm, yet so soft...
    -ya grip
    Just a simple glide from ya fingertips
    ...makes my lips drip...
    But yet you refuse me...
    You intertwine your body with mine
    We lay and talk to kill time...
    I look into you eyes
    you look into mine
    We both know how to read between the lines...
    & we know the lines say the same...
    Yet...
    -you refuse me...
    Our lips touch
    But not so much as a kiss...
    Just enough to later reminence
    Yet
    ...(again) you refuse me
    You know you want it
    I know I want it
    I know you know...
    So why are you killin me ever so softly?
    Teasing me




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