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    dots Submission Name: Love ya self- Body Ideas- ( How U & Ya Body Shdots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       See the title. now think before you speak about yourself.. or anyone else for that mater...-go from there...and love you!


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    dotsLove ya self- Body Ideas- ( How U & Ya Body Shdots
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    Love ya self- Body Ideas- ( How U & Ya Body Should Feel)

    What's all glitter and gold
    Don't necessarily shine
    Sometimes we get blinded by the glimmer..
    Just as we get mislead to think that all our shine
    makes us as great & speacial as new found wine
    Aged with time...
    Age & grace... that's what makes that fine wine so fine
    Not the new bottle with all its shine
    Or the gold wrapper with its glitter and gleam
    Remember that as you look upon ya self & realize
    That time is passing by...
    And never is the lasting of that bottle and its shine
    But the value of it all relies on that taste of that good ol' aged and graceful wine...
    ... that which is on the inside...

    I guess the same goes for the saying
    ..you get what you put into it...
    So the next time you buy that expensive dress
    & then turn right around and eat some ol' cheap greasy mess...
    And then wonder and complain about how you "can't fit that mess"
    Or you paid too much for that "damn dress"...
    You get what you put into it..
    More or less...




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