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    dots Submission Name: Darknessdots
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    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.54 - 101/55/50
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 604
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1388



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    dotsDarknessdots
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    This darkness is coming so fast....

    Breathing is becoming such a task....

    The darkness is closing in ....

    I don't know if I can survive ....

    Nothing to keep me alive ....

    now comes the pain ....

    I don't know how much lonnger I can remain....

    .. ..

    Whatching my tears fall like rain....

    As my heart pounds like the beat of a drum....

    Now comes the pain....

    The darkness still growing within....

    It's almost here, I'm almost gone ....

    One last beat before I'm done....

    .. ..

    My mind is aching ....

    My body 's shaking ....

    And My heart is still breaking....

    That pounding in my chest is lessening more and more....

    .. ..

    Here comes the darkness as it closes in ....

    I can't see, I can't breath ....

    My mind is caving in ....

    It's almost black it's almost dark....

    I'm almost gone here comes the pain....

    It's so dark theres nothing but black....

    I'ts almost here, im almost gone....

    Now comes the pain....





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      Nice Dude, I have no clue what to say to you, besides, like all the other poems you wrote and let me read, i have no clue what it is about, but it sounds awsome. And of course you are probably disapointed that I was the one commenting and not some other person, but o well, You will live. HA HA!
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    | Posted on 2008-09-04 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]


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