Strong words
Though short to me you are speaking of someone who is afraid of Love or afraid of success and is scared to make a move
I myself feel like this constantly so I know of the feeling you are writing of
If I were you I would add a little more to this and dont be afraid to add some Honest emotion to explain to the reader just why you feel like this
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
God Bless
Ron