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    dots Submission Name: Feeldots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 523



    Description:
       Poem of metaphors lol

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    dotsFeeldots
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    Feel the hand caress the roses,
    Feel the finger outline the rubies,
    Listen to the gentle wind,
    Delicate.
    Quiet.
    As it blows in your ear.
    Feel the hand run over silk,
    Feel the drums beat faster,
    When you are around.
    See the eyes look in the pools of dreams,
    The hand as it touches yours.
    The words whispered.
    Just for you.
    So gentle.
    So low.
    So meaningful.
    For you,
    Only you,
    Forever meant.




    Submitted on 2008-09-01 17:32:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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