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    dots Submission Name: Epiphany of an angry, dying poetdots

    Author: Angie444
    ASL Info:    15 f Romania
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 92/34/55
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsEpiphany of an angry, dying poetdots

    Only after I will have profoundly analyzed
    The quintessence of all that I will think I've agonized
    -Surrounded by cynicism and unnerving people still
    -Put to sleep by sweet illusions inside a prescription pill-
    I'll realize, amused by my own plotline's final twist
    Deep down where the sweet denials of any meaning still persist
    That I've just had only one chance out of six billion
    To exist.

    Now I can place a bet, my friend, that I will not be breathing then
    Only the very last of ink drops will be dripping from my pen.

    Submitted on 2008-09-01 23:13:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well I find this profoundly interesting.
    Since the most important fifth essence you may have agonized is causing a poet turned angry to die, the denial of life may be soothed by the pills sweet illusions, you may better your chances to keep on breathing by using a ball point pen so that there can be no ink drops from your pen. Love this. Joachim
    | Posted on 2008-09-03 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]

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